I’m not thrilled with the color which is predominantly brown. Susan didn’t have a choice. She’s in the water and got a face on view. Once again it’s a candid shot. The grouping is spread and this dictates a wide angle shot. It reminds me of the game ‘statue.’ We would throw kids randomly and they stood frozen in funny positions. We would laugh at the strange tableau. You got reflections. The horizon is near the top of the frame. More sky and I think that the foreground kids would have been underexposed. It’s a good shot under the circumstances. There’s not too much you can do with the basic brown.