What flows about this image is Jolie’s arm nicely tying across the frame. Susan got a good image. The color saturation is a little flat. So that makes for an even exposure on a high overcast day. You could subtly add a little saturation. Just be sure to be subtle. I tend to come back to images, that I have enhanced, and found that a little was too much. So be aware that later the image may look to manipulated. Never make changes to the original image. Use a copy. You got the bubbles in focus along with the kids. I know that’s what you were aiming to do.